Hey Steph I think that your values are working nicely and the forms read as round. My only suggestion would be to focus on the character of this dude more. This could be showing more of his face and getting an expression that expresses who this character is. When we went down to Disney last semester I talked to Paul Felix and he emphasized having a twisting motion in my character designs. It might be nice to have your character's upper torso sort of twist towards the camera. If you did this your could get a better angle on the face and this would improve the concept of what you are shooting for with your character's personality. Hope this helps! Good luck.
Hey Steph I think that your values are working nicely and the forms read as round. My only suggestion would be to focus on the character of this dude more. This could be showing more of his face and getting an expression that expresses who this character is. When we went down to Disney last semester I talked to Paul Felix and he emphasized having a twisting motion in my character designs. It might be nice to have your character's upper torso sort of twist towards the camera. If you did this your could get a better angle on the face and this would improve the concept of what you are shooting for with your character's personality. Hope this helps! Good luck.
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