Hey Katie, I really like both your pieces. Especially the way you separated the warm and cool light on the exterior, it's dividing the space nicely and gives it a sense of realism which is pretty dang hard to do for me... One suggestion I'd offer is to start considering your darks a bit more, I think in the interior they're starting to look washed out. I also think you can start fading out the details and lessen the degree of contrast in those areas, especially the clutter of objects on the leftmost side of the exterior piece. I think doing that will help a lot, since I noticed some of those areas read better in your darker print-out for class.
Hey Katie,
ReplyDeleteI really like both your pieces. Especially the way you separated the warm and cool light on the exterior, it's dividing the space nicely and gives it a sense of realism which is pretty dang hard to do for me...
One suggestion I'd offer is to start considering your darks a bit more, I think in the interior they're starting to look washed out. I also think you can start fading out the details and lessen the degree of contrast in those areas, especially the clutter of objects on the leftmost side of the exterior piece.
I think doing that will help a lot, since I noticed some of those areas read better in your darker print-out for class.