Hey Steph I really like your handling of the paint in this piece it has a really nice feel. Although I think that your values in the middleground are too dark especially in relation to those in the foreground. I took your piece into photoshop in greyscale and made everything in the middle ground lighter and it seemed to give the room more space. I also entertained the idea of a ground plane. I can send you the black and white comp if you want to check it out.
still need work on foreground and stuff in the darkness. crit away~
Hey Steph I really like your handling of the paint in this piece it has a really nice feel. Although I think that your values in the middleground are too dark especially in relation to those in the foreground. I took your piece into photoshop in greyscale and made everything in the middle ground lighter and it seemed to give the room more space. I also entertained the idea of a ground plane. I can send you the black and white comp if you want to check it out.
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