Hieu, I like the bottom right thumb a lot. It's very interesting how you clutter 2/3 of the image with bars and cages and leave a small opening so you can see the doorway. Very nice framing and good feeling of depth. As for the exterior shot it's working for me too, the castle looks hidden and it feels like you're sneaking up to it through the bushes and trees. My only advice would be to break up the shapes of those foilages in da foreground more when you have a chance. Instead of just solid shapes show the silhouettes of leaves and branches within it, like you can see thhrough them slightly.
Hieu, I like the bottom right thumb a lot. It's very interesting how you clutter 2/3 of the image with bars and cages and leave a small opening so you can see the doorway. Very nice framing and good feeling of depth. As for the exterior shot it's working for me too, the castle looks hidden and it feels like you're sneaking up to it through the bushes and trees. My only advice would be to break up the shapes of those foilages in da foreground more when you have a chance. Instead of just solid shapes show the silhouettes of leaves and branches within it, like you can see thhrough them slightly.
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