Wednesday, May 6, 2009
Reposting Castle based on a crit
Hey, sorry to repost, but Liz gave me a good crit and I wanted to see if she thought it was any better. I took that random tower and made it more like the building on the lower left. The tower, I was envisioning as where the witch would keep all her birds. So I wanted it to kinda poke out a bit more then the other towers. But I like it more now. Thanks for your crit Liz! Better or still "random"?
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definitely looks better. I think you could push it even more in terms of size relationships to the rest of the house if it is going to be such an important story element.
ReplyDeleteOk, thanks again Liz!
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