this is what i have currently. they are both still in block-in phase so it's kind of sloppy. i'm just trying to get the gesture down in them. i took the feed back that i got from kanako and katie and tried to apply it to the top piece. i hope it's working more now.
for the bottom one, i'm thinking of adding a tree to the right side to bring in more foreground elements. what do you guys think?
Hi Dora, the problem with the bottom one is that I'm not sure what I'm supposed to be feeling. That shape on the right kind of looks like a giant caterpillar. Are they lost? or are they leaving or going to the Castle?
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