Steve's witch

Hey Steve, Kanako and Justin gave some good suggestions for you, I just want to add that I feel you have a tangent between the cage and the glow of the flower. The overlapping of he arm/wrist and the cage would be different if she was hauling and yanking the top of the cage at the same time. In my draw-over I had the flow of her arm and cage swoop down like a "u" shape so it serve to frame Joringel and also to lead to the witch's face as a secondary focal point. Hope that works for you.