Hey Liz- It is looking good, she looks really mad and crazy. I would not want to be in her way. She seems a little floaty, I get she in fast pursuit but maybe tilt her a little more left? I think that would make her look more grounded. You might have to reposition her little foot though. I think her face needs some pink accents since it is so cold out or how about some breath vapors? She looks very clean as well, I am thinking she would at least have some sardine juice splashed somewhere. Your harpoon looks awesome! Hope that helps you.
looks cool liz, i'd say add some wear and tear to her costuming. she looks pretty clean for being on a boat. and soften some edges and desaturate things to give it more depth. like you could probably desaturate her foot going back a lot more.
Eyebrows! I finally figured out what she was needing with her face. Also, I would say foot that is touching the ground needs to possibly angle to screen right a bit. I looks a little strange to me. Good luck!