This is a rough first pass of my "sighting" sequence. The setup is that the daughter of Ahab has disguised herself as a man in order to get on this whaling ship.
These aren't to time yet so it's kind of like watching it in slow motion. If you can bear with it, please let me know if it's confusing or unclear or at all comprehensible. All comments, suggestions, observations are appreciated.
Here's the first version. The "sighting" is only implied by the dialogue.
Here is an alternate version, where Moby is actually onscreen.
If you actually sit through both versions, please let me know which you feel is the better sequence. Thanks!