Tuesday, September 22, 2009

Still a work in progress any feed back at all i would really appreciate it. thanks

2 comments:

  1. Hey Tony, I would say maybe try to silhouette his right arm/harpoon more. His right arm and the majority of the harpoon are within his body shape. The butt of his harpoon and the point of the other harpoon are kinda twinning as well. Hope that helps. Disregard if they already said that during class.

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  2. hey tony, it might just be my copmuter screen, but i think you could put in more reflective light. I see some relfective green on his pants but when i squint at it the values are really similar. all i got for now.

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