hey miles. clean up his "hands" they look floaty to me, like they cant support all that weight. and put more shadows in some of his skin wrinkles. none of them go really deep, like if you squint at it all that nice texture disapears. hope that makes sense!
Hey Miles, I agree with steph, the arms look unbalanced, especially the right one. Maybe you can play with more fat folds around his shoulder area. Think of a fat guy sitting, there is a lot of overlap. Browner one does look better. Good luck!-Justin