Saturday, May 9, 2009

Nelson's crit

Hi Nelson, I thought the trees are evenly spaced out in the middle ground. Try to vary that by adding more trees and pushing more on the various thickness. I can see that you are trying to vary the trees (some closer and other farther) but they seem to be all on the same plane as well, making your piece look flatter. It probably can be fixed with value, pushing some back and pulling others forward..I hope that helps in your development.. I like your concept overall and can't wait to see how it finishes. = )

1 comment:

  1. Thanks Miles for taking the time out to draw over my piece. Its funny how it is all clearer now. I'm kicking myself for not starting the composition aspect earlier... Back to the drawing board. Thanks a lot.