Sunday, May 10, 2009

Thanks for all the great comments on my stuff, guys! I have not made all of the changes yet because I have been working on my second moment. I'm hoping it is dramatic enough and the background is not confusing.


  1. Did Micah pose for you?? hehe :) I like it!! I think his one leg is a bit straight for balancing on a branch...and a little furrow in his brow to show fear wouldn't be a bad idea. Also the little flower could be about to blow away in the wind! That would add to the drama and the windy look of your piece. Maybe a few birds flying in the background?

  2. Hey Liz, I agree with Chantrelle's feedback. Is he more fearless, or more cowardly? Right now, he seems quite badass. His right arm and leg are almost parallel, so I might play with that? If the tree is not totally dead, then perhaps you could add a leaf or two. I hope that helps! It's looking good.