Monday, May 11, 2009

this is what i have currently. they are both still in block-in phase so it's kind of sloppy. i'm just trying to get the gesture down in them. i took the feed back that i got from kanako and katie and tried to apply it to the top piece. i hope it's working more now.

for the bottom one, i'm thinking of adding a tree to the right side to bring in more foreground elements. what do you guys think?

1 comment:

  1. Hi Dora, the problem with the bottom one is that I'm not sure what I'm supposed to be feeling. That shape on the right kind of looks like a giant caterpillar. Are they lost? or are they leaving or going to the Castle?