Wednesday, May 6, 2009

Reposting Castle based on a crit



Hey, sorry to repost, but Liz gave me a good crit and I wanted to see if she thought it was any better. I took that random tower and made it more like the building on the lower left. The tower, I was envisioning as where the witch would keep all her birds. So I wanted it to kinda poke out a bit more then the other towers. But I like it more now. Thanks for your crit Liz! Better or still "random"?

2 comments:

  1. definitely looks better. I think you could push it even more in terms of size relationships to the rest of the house if it is going to be such an important story element.

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